Sullen Birds

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one last summer day
cold wind under low black clouds
sullen birds gone quiet

21/3/13

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27 Responses to “Sullen Birds”

  1. crows on the wire
    wind swinging them silently
    summer has ended

  2. Too cool you two. Thank you for such a treat.

  3. She paints her picture
    He writes the final three lines
    they retire, content.

  4. jvonbargen Says:

    Brill, both of you!

  5. Don’t let the brat fool you – he’s taught me just about everything… 🙂 brought me up right from a lass who spouted “awesome” and wrote sappy love-pomes 😀 . HE is the master…

  6. […] Here is the original text from comments off the original haiku on his blog…I just “stole them” from his pages to have a copy of my own.  Phill is a true master of many arts, and a dear friend. You should check out his plethora of work! […]

  7. They trade compliments
    Present virtual bouquets
    Haiku warriors

  8. Mercifully short
    Bad haiku (just like this one)
    Can be soon forgot

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